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Post by stephen99 on Sept 30, 2012 20:34:00 GMT -6
"at the night of the storm, shadow and his group of darkness ran into the patrols of the river's storm and the fire's blazing after the fallen oak. the war ends when shadow's life is taken from the red-eared cat"
fallen oak-oak (gets killed by facilier while hunting near nightclan's border)
shadow and group of darkness- facilier and his rouge group
river's storm- riverstorm and a nightclan patrol
fire's blazing- fireblaze and a nightclan patrol
red-eared cat- redear
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Post by Crystal on Oct 1, 2012 15:04:57 GMT -6
Cool plot c=
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Post by Stephen99 on Oct 1, 2012 16:44:35 GMT -6
Thanks crystal. Too bad that sliver&oak couple won't ever happen!  |
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Post by FusedHearts on Oct 1, 2012 17:53:03 GMT -6
Nice plot  I can make a few adjustments to it so it will fit with the plot. So, currently, Riverstorm is out looking for Redear. Around the outskirts of Nightclan territory, he finds Leopardpaw, Lionpaw, Adderpaw, Mousepaw, and Auburnpaw, and pauses to ask them what in Bloodclan's name they are doing. (Riverstorm and a nightclan patrol) Right after he asks this though, Facilier and his gang show up and they start fighting. (Shadow and his group of darkness) Oak and Silverheart sneak out of Creekclan territory and happen to come upon the war. Facilier kills Oak. D: (Fallen Oak) Brindlepelt, who was watching the fight from the bushes, decides to run to the Nightclan camp for help. She gets Fireblaze, Tinytiger, and Frostheart to rush to the battle. (Fires blazing) And lastly, Riverstorm attacks Facilier in a fit of rage after he kills Oak, and Redear, who also happened to be nearby, hears the commotion, and upon seeing her mate pinned by Facilier, kills him. |
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Post by Stephen99 on Oct 1, 2012 18:35:58 GMT -6
Nice plot I can make a few adjustments to it so it will fit with the plot. So, currently, Riverstorm is out looking for Redear. Around the outskirts of Nightclan territory, he finds Lionpaw, Adderpaw, Mousepaw, and Auburnpaw, and pauses to ask them what in Bloodclan's name they are doing. (Riverstorm and a nightclan patrol) Right after he asks this though, Facilier and his gang show up and they start fighting. (Shadow and his group of darkness) Oak and Silverheart sneak out of Creekclan territory and happen to come upon the war. Facilier kills Oak. D: (Fallen Oak) Brindlepelt, who was watching the fight from the bushes, decides to run to the Nightclan camp for help. She gets Fireblaze, Tinytiger, and Frostheart to rush to the battle. (Fires blazing) And lastly, Riverstorm attacks Facilier in a fit of rage after he kills Oak, and Redear, who also happened to be nearby, hears the commotion, and upon seeing her mate pinned by Facilier, kills him. I love that fusedhearts, it's epic. |
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